Friday, March 27, 2009

Overhead Assignment

The person who I admire the most is my uncle. He is the exact definition of what a man should be. He loves his family, is a protector and provider, and though he has made a lot of mistakes in his past, he chooses not to let them weigh him down. He is also constantly moving towards a brighter future. He inspires me because he has risen from the slums and gangs of the west-side of Chicago to be a pastor of his own church right in South Holland. He might not have his own church but he is still aspiring and doing what he can to make his dreams happen.

1 comment:

mbrown8625 said...

This is beautifully written and you've chosen a wonderful person to admire. But you didn't use any repetition at all. and you absolutely had to incorporate repetiton